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Max's Diary--First kiss

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[A/N Before reading this forget about all the three time Fang and Max have kissed. They never happened in this. I messed up and it was too perfect to change it so...they never kissed before. Also THIS IS MY 100TH DEVIATION!! WHOO!! PARTAY!!  I would like to thank my lovely readers for reading my 100 deviations, or at least some of them. Also, comment on how you like this. ALSO the link for the tempest is in the Artist's comments.]


Dear Diary,

Here's my day...

"That sounds cool. What is it?" I asked walking up to Fang and Gazzy. They were listening to something on the computer. It sounded pretty cool. Like, a, a--
"The Tempest." Fang answered. Yeah, it sounded like a tempest, hence the name The Tempest.
"Good name," I commented.
"Isn't it though,"
I sat down on Fang's lap and he put his arms around my waist and kissed my cheek.
"I like the part in the middle, you know when everythings happening at once and it sounds all crazy, it sounds so cool." Gazzy said, then added, "Like, the middle of the storm."
Okay, for those of you who don't know, a tempest is a storm. It has strong winds, hail, rain, snow, sleet, anything you can think off.
Compare this to the storm. The beginning, well, duh, the beginning of the storm. When the triangle starts playing, the rain, light rain. When the saxophones come in, that's when the wind picks up. After the triangles gone, that's getting close to the middle of the storm. When everythings going crazy and every instrument is doing something different, there we have the middle of the storm. Then it starts to calm down, then we get near the end when you hear the jaws sounding music. Just like in a storm, it stops for a minute, then it's back, and theres the end! It's a great song/instrumental.
"Fang, get your butt in here and help with the dishes." Nudge shouted. "You can oogle at Max later."
Fang sighed, gave me a quick kiss, and left for the kitchen.

   "Hey," Ella greeted as she sat down beside me.
"Hi," I sighed.
"Can I ask you something?"
"Sure, what?"
"Is he a good kisser?"
That one took me by suprise.
"What?" I asked, sorta shocked.
"Is Fang a good kisser? Just wondering."
"Uh..." I blushed. "I wouldn't really now that." I muttered.
"What?! You've been dating for a month and you haven't even kissed him?!" She shrieked. I shook my head. "That is sad, Maximum, sad."
I rolled my eyes and got up and stomped off to my room.

        Later that night, there was a soft knock on my door. I already knew who it was, of course. And he knew I knew it was him. So he just came in, shutting the door behind him, and sat down on the bed beside me. He wrapped his arms around me and kissed my cheek.
"What's wrong?" He asked, apparently picking up on my sour attitude. I wriggled out of his grip and laid down on my side. He laid down behind me and put his arm around my waist. I shifted until I was facing him.
"Planning on answering anytime soon?" He asked. I shook my head. He pulled me closer and I laid my forehead against his chest. Still sensing my pessimistic mood, Fang pulled me away from him and.....kissed me.

It felt like an explosion of happiness in my head. At first I couldn't do anything, too much shock. Then I kissed him back. I was too happy for words. Even now I can't tell you how happy I was. I felt like a little kid in a candy store. A little puppy picked out from the animal shelter. A ear of corn picked first. A weed left untouched. That happy. I felt drunk sorta. High maybe. High from happiness. High from Fang. High from Fang's lips coming in contact with mine.

That was the best kiss....ever.

Love, Maximum Margret Ride/Martinez/Batchelder
Wanna hear the Tempest? Here's the link just click on the listen to flash audio example. The band played this at our spring concert![link];pubnum=0


Before reading this forget about all the three time Fang and Max have kissed. They never happened in this. I messed up and it was too perfect to change it so...they never kissed before. Also THIS IS MY 100TH DEVIATION!! WHOO!! PARTAY!! I would like to thank my lovely readers for reading my 100 deviations, or at least some of them. Also, comment on how you like this.


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